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2010-09-22 [NinjaBasco]: well the reason i chose it was because it would have been interesting with two heat users in the mansion but i think i might have another idea i just have to do some more thinking
2010-09-23 [NinjaBasco]: If i change his ice abilities can i still have them?
All of my other ideas were kind of fail ideas.
2010-09-23 [Figgy]: Yeah I think we can work it out. :)
2010-09-23 [NinjaBasco]: I like his back story so if you don't mind i want to keep that the same.
2010-09-23 [Figgy]: I don't know so much about the giant mech destroying his village part...
2010-09-23 [NinjaBasco]: well i was going to let that be a super genius that hated mutants and eventually tried to attack the school.
i can change it though that part was more for flavor then any thing.
2010-09-23 [Figgy]: We already have a giant plot with someone out to get the school.
2010-09-23 [NinjaBasco]: oh ok sorry then.
i will change it and let you know as soon as i am done.
if you have any suggestions i am always looking to improve.
2010-09-23 [Veltzeh]: The mech could be a Sentinel.
2010-09-23 [Figgy]: That could work.
2010-09-23 [NinjaBasco]: sounds good to me if you don't mind i am going to put robot since he doesn't know what sentinels are.
oh and i have an idea for his powers still working out the kinks though.
2010-09-23 [Figgy]: Put sentinel, since the character profile is for all the other players to see. Just add the note that he didn't know what it was.
2010-09-23 [NinjaBasco]: ok cool. How about for abilities he can make a web that comes from his fingers. That and he talk to spiders. If you like this would you mind if he had a pet spider?
2010-09-24 [Figgy]: That actually sounds really unique. Let me talk to Dur about it and I will let you know. ;)
2010-09-24 [NinjaBasco]: If you do go with this ability i might end up changing his personality a little. Do to his ability change nothing much though.
2010-09-24 [Veltzeh]: ("Due to his ability change." :) Do is a verb.)
2010-09-24 [NinjaBasco]: sorry. so anything about my new power????
2010-09-25 [NinjaBasco]: I changed his power so I hope this works for you.
2010-09-25 [Duredhel]: Ok... too much text for too little substance. I'd say considerably narrow the focus.
He can create sound shockwaves capable of pushing people back. He also has super hearing and can "see" sound waves.
There, no need for "cone of silence" stuff and and manipulating sounds other than his own, it just makes the power messy. Too much stuff that may seem connected or consequent, but really isn't. Less power stuff, more history stuff.
2010-09-26 [NinjaBasco]: I hope this is better if i missed something please tell me.
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